Oh, I adore this. I loved both sides of this story at first, but this second part just highlighted spectacularly the differences in the way the stories have happened and the way the characters reacted to these situations and to each other, and I just loved the way you handled that so, so much. And the last few segments on Planet PR7-692 made me ridiculously happy! The quiet, in-love settling-down is lovely.
Delightful, detailed writing, too, where even when I was upset with what was happening, I loved just absorbing your words. Love it, love it. I think I'm going to track down more of your stories!
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Date: 2010-04-04 11:51 am (UTC)Delightful, detailed writing, too, where even when I was upset with what was happening, I loved just absorbing your words. Love it, love it. I think I'm going to track down more of your stories!